Link and Malon WIP

This is my entry--so far-- for 's contest. It is NOT turning out how i wanted. In fact i had this HUGE, FANTASTIC idea for an entry, and i started it over a month ago...and then life got in the way. I was so excited for the whole thing, but now I just get more and more disappointed with what i've come up with. If the whole project was in a tangible form, I'd drop-kick it outside and let it freeze in the snow...or stab it to death with a fork.

So here's what i've got so far. I decided to keep it pretty simplistic (like everything else in my gallery haha ) because that just seems to be the way this whole frustrating thing has forced me to go.

I can't change the drawing, but i would like opinions on anything else to make this piece of ... art... better.


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EDIT EDIT EDIT!!! I added more sparkliness, glowiness, and... greeniness? Does it look better?

If i can get this done right away, i might have more time to throw in another (less serious) piccie!